Poem - "I do believe" - AnupR
They think that he's flying
when he's nose-diving ...
freefalling into the abyss
Don't know what he's thinking
And why that smile's on his face
When all plans have
gone for a toss
And everything's
as good as lost
When he's got nothing
to look forward to
And nothing
to hold on to
Seems
He's lost
His chance
His mind
and all hope too
Does he not have the strength to fight?
Why does he not care enough to try?
Why does he feel he's nearing the end?
Why does he continue to pretend?
No answers come and you are amazed
as you see him waving and smiling
at friends and passers-by
they all say - "what a great guy"
When all he's saying is - goodbye
But
As he hurtles towards the end
He hungers for a final glimpse of the sky
So he stops staring into the deep
Turns around and looks towards the Most High
"I do believe ...
Help thou mine unbelief"
-----
I don't expect anyone to understand something that I myself am confused about ... :)
Have a gr8 weekend ya all ...
Update:
Have got exams lined up in October ... and work's more hectic than ever ... All in all, its gonnabe fun!!!! :)
when he's nose-diving ...
freefalling into the abyss
Don't know what he's thinking
And why that smile's on his face
When all plans have
gone for a toss
And everything's
as good as lost
When he's got nothing
to look forward to
And nothing
to hold on to
Seems
He's lost
His chance
His mind
and all hope too
Does he not have the strength to fight?
Why does he not care enough to try?
Why does he feel he's nearing the end?
Why does he continue to pretend?
No answers come and you are amazed
as you see him waving and smiling
at friends and passers-by
they all say - "what a great guy"
When all he's saying is - goodbye
But
As he hurtles towards the end
He hungers for a final glimpse of the sky
So he stops staring into the deep
Turns around and looks towards the Most High
"I do believe ...
Help thou mine unbelief"
-----
I don't expect anyone to understand something that I myself am confused about ... :)
Have a gr8 weekend ya all ...
Update:
Have got exams lined up in October ... and work's more hectic than ever ... All in all, its gonnabe fun!!!! :)
Labels: Poems
posted by anup.777 at 5:50 AM
9 Comments:
"I do believe ...
Help thou mine unbelief"
just like one unlearn's wat one has learnt...you want to unbelieve wat yu believe ?
Hope. Optimism. Faith. A thin string of optimism is good enough to avoid that freefall. Nice one man! Keep it coming.
Yeah man, exams are fun...the occasional diarrhoea afflicting our lives.
exams huh?? all the best dear :)
hugss
=ammu=
deep. well we do wonder at times at others. we wonder why they react that way and this way. but we don't know. even they don't at times. everything is an arrangement from Him. God Bless you. have a good week.
Hey..In my own way i have understood this and can relate to this in a very close manner...I have got the meaning of this and is a perspective I have never thought about and its a refreshing perspective to to the act..Hope u r not boogged down..Me too am just so pissed off man , but wht to do, we all ought to be pissed once in a while right? :) Take care.
I loved it.
**they all say - "what a great guy"
When all he's saying is - goodbye
Thats such a well-analysed thought. It got me good.
TC n good luck with the exams Anup!
Keshi.
Nice poem. Simple and deep.
yeah, we can't expect anyone to understand us... too bad sometimes ;( but what can we do??...
nice poem dear!
hope ur feelin' better now ;)
and thanxx for the mail, got my reply na? ^_^
goodluck for the exams!
Godbless!
It sometimes happens u really don't understand ur thoughts. but u have put them down well. nice post:)
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