Poem - Remember what you are
Poem - Remember what you are ... AnupR
When the night is over
and there's light all around
Keep your head on your shoulders
and your feet on the ground
Don't let pride creep in
and lead you into sin
Just remember where you come from
Just remember what you are
You're just dust that breathes
and flies around for a while
but when the wind stops blowing
you will cease to smile
You're a flower that blooms
but for a day
and though you're beautiful
you will soon fade away
Its gonna be ashes to ashes
and dust to dust
So keep your head on your shoulders
and let love come first
----
This is a note to myself. I've observed that I have a major issue with pride. I don't wanna fall into that trap. Ever!!!! God have mercy!
When the night is over
and there's light all around
Keep your head on your shoulders
and your feet on the ground
Don't let pride creep in
and lead you into sin
Just remember where you come from
Just remember what you are
You're just dust that breathes
and flies around for a while
but when the wind stops blowing
you will cease to smile
You're a flower that blooms
but for a day
and though you're beautiful
you will soon fade away
Its gonna be ashes to ashes
and dust to dust
So keep your head on your shoulders
and let love come first
----
This is a note to myself. I've observed that I have a major issue with pride. I don't wanna fall into that trap. Ever!!!! God have mercy!
Labels: Poems
posted by anup.777 at 5:43 AM
19 Comments:
Me FIRST yeyyyy!
Lovely poem..so true to life...
**but when the wind stops blowing
you will cease to smile
love that line..I always thought of myself as a flash that graces the Earth just once and just for a very lil while...
tc and I LOVE u Anup...Im not too proud to say it :)
Keshi.
Hey Keshi!!! ... u love me ... but u r not too proud to say it??? ... whaddaya mean by that??? .... am a bit confused .... but I love ya too ... and I'm proud to say it too! ;)
hey! that is beautiful and very true! Everything will fade away but the only thing that wouldn't is being beautiful. Beauty will not fade.
**tc and I LOVE u Anup...Im not too proud to say it :)
lol u didnt get it duhhhhh! I mean I dun have too much pride thats stopping me from saying I love u :) got it?
Keshi.
Hiiiii...Ok tht laughter was for the comment Keshi Vs you...
The poem was wonderful...You are not dust boy and though you may think you r a beautiful flower only for a day, remember that your beauty is something that is within you and is with you always.....
And you say you are slipping into "pride"...Without "prejudice", lemme say, you dont seem anything close to tht...You r an adorable guy!!! trust me on tht...Wish I was younger...:) :)
glad to have u back dear
:)
=am000nie=
@Bubbly Soda
it is so true ... what u said about beauty ... Thanks so much ... u r a dear ... :)
@Keshi
aah I getcha now ... and I love u some more now ... coz' u r beautiful and patient too ... hehe ;)
@Scribblez
u r too kind buddy ... :) ... but why da ya wannabe younger? ... u r perfect as u are yaar ;)
@Amu
:) its good to hear from u dear ... now if u post something other than about Da Vinci Code ... i'll be able to comment on it ... :)
Accidentally stumbled on your blog, was looking for Mirza Ghalib enthusiasts in Blogger.
You write poetry, but curb the rhyme, have pun with poetry!
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I dont really blog on blogger.
Goodluck.
totally grounding poem.seems to be that you are really the down-to-earth types :)
its as beautifully written as the person u r from within...loved it!
Wonderful!!!
Im a beautiful 'patient' in ur hospital of Love, Anup :) lol!
Keshi.
"Just remember where you come from
Just remember what you are"
nice...so true bud!:):)
@Manish
thanks man! Good luck 2 u too!
@Maya
Thanks Maya ... I'm not really that type ... am trying to be, though :)
@Curious
Thanks 4 da compliment yaar ... really appreciate it ... now if only the ones I've loved in the outside world felt that way ... hmmm ... :)
@DEG
thanks buddy! :)
@Keshi
... in that case, I'm never gonna let u leave ... I'll keep u under observation always ... hehe :)
@TEHL
thank u girl! :)
lol Anup so I better rent a bed in the hospital for good ha? ;-)
Keshi.
"You're a flower that blooms
but for a day
and though you're beautiful
you will soon fade away"
hmm so true! :)
"You're a flower that blooms
but for a day
and though you're beautiful
you will soon fade away"
awesome, anup!
btw, how have you been?
@Keshi
You better do that ... Don't worry I'll give ya a discount ... :)
@White Forest
:) thanks buddy!
@SFO
me? Where have u been? U just dissapeared yaar!
goshh I thought it was free lol!
Keshi.
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