Poem - Open ur eyes
- AnupR
From the cradle to the grave
Will you be a slave
For you aren't blind
And yet, choose not to see
For you aren't deaf
And yet, choose not to listen
For you aren't dumb
And yet, choose not to speak
Listen to reason
See the light
Be wise and humble
And at least try to embrace the truth
Accept ...
You are weak
You never were free
You probably never will be
If ...
You love your chains
You enjoy the pain
You enjoy the sympathy
You don't crave salvation
So ...
Go about your business
Keep building castles in the air
Never spare a thought for anyone else
Not even for the only one
... who really does care
... and never open your eyes ..... again
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yes ... the ramblings of a confused poet ... bear with me world ... too many questions ... very few answers ... I need some time
Labels: Poems
18 Comments:
woow that is beautiful! It is so true how we choose to live a life that is alike the poem. It is sad isn't it. We chose that live and live on it though we know we are not going anywhere far. good one mate!
..aww i love it Anup ^_^ nice poem....
Gosh!!..straight from the heart ^_~ ...is she still ur inspiration for this??
... lucky her ;) she owns ur blog na, u can make a book someday and just make the title her name wowww!
..keep it up yaar, i always enjoy ur sweet,confused, heartwarming poems!
..enjoy weekend and thanx for orkut message *wink*
hugss,
-kathy-
wow..this is life...confused poet? are u sure....u write very well dear
Hmm.. Slave to the vagaries of the mind and to the cobwebs of a busy life... Im a slave to the expressions of my heart and I embrace it with open arms..
OMG!!!! Im rambling too.. I think u r contagious.. ;)
:)))
..Me
dard hota hai dard jab chubhta nahi ??
brimming with beauty as always.
Tooo goood poem...and u r one good poet :)
man.. u r talent! :)
=am000nie=
A heart piercing true peoem...We r indeed slaves, to others n ourselves I feel..Good poem buddy! :)
nice poem..check out mine
gosh u been doin some awful lot of thinkin eh ... very well written though .. i wonder how can ppl write so well !!
keep up da gud work!
but if u see too much, hear too much, speak too much, u wont see what u really need to see...sometimes it's best to be blind, deaf and mute...just my opinion :)
u write so well Anup!
Keshi.
Sometimes too many options also confuses...!
Awesome poetry done here :)
First time here ..liked ur poetry ..keep writing
CHeers
Still Musing???
:D
..Me
Yeah, the world can be so tough and confusing at times. But hey, just remember that you're not alone and that you can always be strong if you know who to call. ;)
Love the poem. ^^
Take care and God bless!
yaawwwwwwwwwwwwwn.....
where r ya???
Keshi.
I so wish to reply to each and every one of u wonderful people who have dropped by and encouraged me ... but, I've been having a bad week ... So, THANK U dear friends ... I'll try and catch u on ur blogs real soon ... till then ... TC!
yes ... the ramblings of a confused poet ... bear with me world ... too many questions ... very few answers ... I need some time
hmmm life is really confusing vt all ths stuff going on wat stuff i guess u know.....intresting..gud poem
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