Sunday, January 15, 2006

Poem - You're wrong

"You're Wrong" - Anup R

If you think I'm broken ... that I can't go on ...
You're wrong ...
If you think I'm weak ... that I can't move on ...
You're wrong ...

It's been too long
since the sun's been gone
and you're the one
who drove me to become strong
So, you're wrong ....

And if you ever think
that I still care for you
that after all this time I still yearn for you
that not a day goes by when I don't think about you
You're wrong.... I wish you were wrong....
I so wish you were..... wrong.....

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12 Comments:

Blogger Michelle said...

nice :-)

6:08 AM  
Blogger tulipspeaks said...

awesome!! as if written for me, as the response for my latest post.. :) u know what i mean, dont u?

hugsss

=am000nie=

6:41 AM  
Blogger Dalicia said...

sounds like you broke up with your gf?

9:43 AM  
Blogger Janette said...

Nice work. Why are you so unlucky in love is my question? Thanks for you post on my blog and God bless!!

6:05 PM  
Blogger anup.777 said...

Thank you all for dropping by!

Yes, Amutha, I do know what u mean... ;)

And Elaine, she wasn't my gf ... she was a friend... I cared for her (still do)... a bit too much I guess... and that frightened her off... Sad, eh?

Janette, I've been asking myself that very thing .... over and over again.... but, my day will soon come... when a girl will love me with the same passion with which I love her... God willing....

8:11 PM  
Blogger Keshi said...

Hey Anup u ok? Good poem but I hope it doesnt relate to u in real...stay happy ok :)

Keshi.

8:43 PM  
Blogger anup.777 said...

Hi Keshi, thank you very much for your concern... at least someone cares....

(A few lines on my frustration)
I'm just fine... my heart's been ripped out and trampled on... but I'm just fine... my dreams have been scattered... but I'm just fine... my hopes have been shattered... but I'm just fine.... I no longer have the courage to dream.... but I'm just fine...

10:46 PM  
Blogger Dalicia said...

oh okay :) sometimes it's best to learn our mistakes the hard way.

do take it easy with this too much caring for her. stay strong...plenty of things to enjoy out there!

11:56 PM  
Blogger anup.777 said...

Thanks Elaine ... am trying to do just that... move on.... but, it's not easy u see ... :)

4:02 AM  
Blogger Keshi said...

r u really just fine? or u just want to convince urself that ur just fine when actually ur not?

Keshi.

4:30 PM  
Blogger Dalicia said...

no one said it was easy..my first boyfriend took me 2 yrs get to get over my feelings for him. not a good idea to have so much hate on another person. it will just hurt you even more.

you'll find a better person :)

10:10 PM  
Blogger anup.777 said...

@keshi
I don't know... I'm confused as usual... but am hanging on...

@ Elaine
I sure hope so too... I love being in love... everything seems so great! :).. Can't wait for me to get completely over her and fall in love again...

11:07 PM  

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