Friday, March 17, 2006

Poem - I choose Life

I Choose Life - AnupR

At the crossroads she stands
She beckons
She even calls out my name
She then stretches out her hands
Offering refuge from the doubts and questions
... that plague young minds

And then she says,
"Pain is all that's left
Rejection is all you're ever gonna get
and you may try but you'll never forget
the way she left you bereft

I'm the cure to your misery
I'm the one who can set you free
Just entrust yourself to me
Just spend the night with me"

But I am just down ... not out
and I know what she's talking about
So I hurry right by where she's standing
I don't stop ... not even glancing
And as I pass she hears me saying

"The pain and the worry
Is just temporary
The future's uncertain
... sometimes it does frighten me
But, in your arms if I spend the night
I'd sleep forever
And that just wouldn't be right

Why do you forget
that I'm not only a heartbroken lover
I'm also a son, a friend, a brother
and I'm certainly not in any hurry
... to stand before the Creator

So, hear this, beautiful Ma'm
Listen to me ... and forget not this day
I see right thru your pretty sham
and I don't give a damn
... for what you have to say

I choose life!"

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Yes, yes, I know ... I should be studying ... not blogging ... but, all the studying seems to be getting my creative juices flowing too! ... I got this one last night as I lay down to sleep ... and I couldn't help but jot it down ... and what I jotted ... I shared .... :)

Thanks a lot for all your best wishes, dear buddies ... :)
I'm studing hard!

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34 Comments:

Blogger SkittishKat said...

Hey Bro,
Wow! I'm awed!
Keep up the good work.
This one is really impressive.
Karen

9:52 PM  
Blogger Este Miseria said...

:)

6:12 AM  
Blogger Este Miseria said...

erased the last post have we?

havent seen u around my space somehow..wonder why

6:12 AM  
Blogger Renu said...

Simply beautiful..:) And thx for the lovely comment on one of my poems :)

8:22 AM  
Blogger Renu said...

BTW I've linked you..I hope you dont mind :)

8:27 AM  
Blogger Dreamy Eyed Gal said...

wow!!!...I just wish every1 thought like u!!!...u know not give up after 1 heartbreak...there r so many ppl who care abt them but they just dt care enuf and give up on life just coz some1 who doesnt even care hurt them!!!...I really like ur optimism!!!
All the best for ur xams...and these kinda breaks r alwez welcome!!!;-)

8:57 AM  
Blogger lil _kath said...

Phew!good poem again..like for always^_^ how'd you do that yaar?I mean it's hard to compose one poem because of the rhymes and of course the whole message itself.Hmm.it's just means you're really inspired by someone naa hehe..^_~
Anyways,you chosed life now so goodluck...for sure the best one will come on your way,very soon..
Study hard and Godbless you.

cheers,
-kathy-

9:01 PM  
Blogger Arz000n said...

Awesome....

"Pain is all that's left
Rejection is all you're ever gonna get
and you may try but you'll never forget
the way she left you bereft

:(
Pain is all thts left in ma life too....think I shud start writing poems too...but am wearing the mask of having fun filled life...coz I dont know how to put down pain in words...I can only hide it :)

9:17 PM  
Blogger bubbly soda said...

That poem's impact on me is so deep that I don't know what to say. I really love it.

9:32 PM  
Blogger tulipspeaks said...

Why do you forget
that I'm not only a heartbroken lover
I'm also a son, a friend, a brother
and I'm certainly not in any hurry
... to stand before the Creator


how true...
that are the most beautiful lines in this poem..
i love it! muuuaxx

=am000nie=

6:36 PM  
Blogger Roshomon said...

Wish studying could make me so creative...
Very Nice :)

7:27 PM  
Blogger Keshi said...

**Thanks a lot for all your best wishes, dear buddies ... :)
I'm studing hard!

what u studying so hard? HER? lol!


Anyways good luck mate! And yeah Anup choose life...especially cos Im still in this world ;-)


Keshi.

7:36 PM  
Blogger anup.777 said...

@SK
Thanks so much, Karen .. :)

@CA
yup ... didn't go with the melancholic mood in here ... so moved it to da other blog ... :)

@Renu
thanks a lot buddy ... and of course I don't mind ... :)

@DEG
Thanks so much buddy ... u understand whats on my mind ... yes, I can't give up on life just coz' of one person, now can I? ... it would be unfair to so many who care for me ...
Thanks for all ur wishes! :)

@LK
"it's just means you're really inspired by someone naa hehe"
yup ... u r absolutely right, buddy! :)
the past still inspires me ... and I'm actually bugged by it!

I just wanna be normal yaar ... I think I'm just too damn senti for this world ... gotta change ...

@arz000n
"but am wearing the mask of having fun filled life"
we aren't so different, buddy ... Only bloggers and a few close friends actually know of the heartbreak behind the smile that's plastered on my face ...
Hang in there buddy ... Choose Life ... and it will come together for you ... I know it will ...

@BS
thanks a lot, buddy. I'm glad u liked it ... :)

@Amu
:) ... glad to see u r online yaar ... I missed ur comments a lot! :)

@Roshomon
lolz ... I think it's my way to escape ... and relax after all the strain of studies ... :)

@Keshi
lolz ... no I'm not studying her ... but I still do think of her occasionally ... :)

Yes, budyy ... u r definitely one of the reasons that I chose life ...

8:36 PM  
Blogger Keshi said...

oh c'mon stop studying ur books and come take a walk with me :)

Keshi.

8:57 PM  
Blogger My Ramblings... said...

Glad to know that you are studying hard. :)

'Choose life' is apt for this one.

the pain and the worry will go away but memories remain for a long time to haunt you...

9:17 PM  
Blogger anup.777 said...

@Keshi
... anything for you, Keshi ... :)

@MyR
lolz ... teasing me, are ya ... hehe :)

yes, true ... memories ... always there to remind u of the screw-ups ... more often than the fun times ...

11:48 PM  
Blogger the_ego_has_landed said...

heheh..nice one..I know even during my exams i tend to get creative and write pretty decent stuff...

Your poem is really neat! :) i wont bug u with who what when;p but its well said:)

6:32 PM  
Blogger Keshi said...

na dun do anything for me...thats dangerous :)

Keshi.

6:53 PM  
Blogger Dalicia said...

not that you mention it...i'll dedicate this one POST for you..watch out!! :)

11:06 PM  
Blogger anup.777 said...

@TEHL
.. thanx buddy ... and since I can see that u r curious ... I'll explain ... that woman is death ... she invites the poet to commit suicide ... sleep forever in her arms ... she tries to take advantage of his heartbreak and seeks to discourage him further ... but he doesn't fall for her trap ... and chooses life instead ...
The reason I wrote this one is coz' suicides have become an easy way out for many in the stressfilled times we live in ... but, it's not right ... coz' there are many who love you ... more importantly, God loves you ... your life has a purpose ... hang in there ... and fulfill your destiny!

@Keshi
I stand by what I said, buddy ... even if its dangerous ... :)

@Elaine
... hmmm ... this I gotta see ... :)

5:46 AM  
Blogger Keshi said...

na na u wouldnt do it..cos rem ur a 'marriage' kinda guy...lol!

Keshi.

4:26 PM  
Blogger anup.777 said...

:) yes Keshi ... u r right ... lolz ... guess it all depends on what u want me to do ... :)

8:44 PM  
Blogger Keshi said...

huh? lol I what d u mean what I want u to do u studying person :)

Keshi.

9:15 PM  
Blogger Cynthia Rae said...

Love, love love the poem! Keep up the good work. Best wishes to you!
Cyn

2:33 AM  
Blogger anup.777 said...

@Keshi
lolz ,,, :)

@Cynthia
thanks soooo much ... :)

7:04 AM  
Blogger Keshi said...

ok 'do' one thing..:) Study me hard..ooops I mean study hard lol!


Keshi.

4:58 PM  
Blogger anup.777 said...

lolz ... now I'm comfortable with both those things ... I plan to do both ... :)

8:15 PM  
Blogger Keshi said...

na u wont be comfy with the first one lollll!

Keshi.

9:53 PM  
Blogger anup.777 said...

na na .. u r wrong ... i'd lov the first option very very much .. :)

11:41 PM  
Blogger Keshi said...

sure? very sure? hehehe...


Keshi.

7:46 PM  
Blogger the_ego_has_landed said...

wow! awesome poem..:) now that u put it in perspective...

9:25 AM  
Blogger anup.777 said...

@Keshi
yes ... I'm sure ... :)lolz

@TEHL
thanx buddy! ... :)

7:45 PM  
Blogger Keshi said...

ok tell me how ur going to do it? lol!

Keshi.

6:37 PM  
Blogger SCRIBBLEZ TO WAKEUP said...

Hey....Smart poem...Yes, sometimes we just need to remembe that wr are not in this earth with only one role but we mean so much to so many people and no matter how hard it is and how much we are hurting because of one person, we got to carry the gunny bag and light the others who love us and whom we love......:) Nice poem Anup

8:04 AM  

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