Saturday, January 21, 2006

Poem - The Fight's on

The Fight's on - Anup R

In a crowd and yet all alone
He stands still
He's got nowhere to go
He often wishes he had a heart of stone
Coz' he'd not have all these feelings
that lay hidden .... that he dare not show

He's spent the night wide awake
Thinking about everything that's at stake
And though life seems to be one big mistake
He still goes around carrying a smile that's fake

Yes he breathes.... but he's not alive
Yes he hurts.... but he doesn't cry
Yes he bleeds.... but he refuses to die
His wings are clipped.... but his spirit still flies high

So he gathers all of his might
He puts on his armor and rushes back into the fight
From dawn to dusk and all through the night
He strives for what be believes is right

He's still praying....
for the revealing....
of the one for whom he's been waiting
for a lifetime of belonging

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This poem may not make sense to most. But, it does to me.... :)

Basically, the guy feels lonely and is searching/praying for his soulmate... the one who'll complete him... who'll complement him...who'll love him for who he is... with the same intensity with which he loves her... (the rest will be covered in an upcoming article on marriages that I promised a few buddies.... I'm still working on it... I'm still gathering my thoughts on it... and hopefully you should see it some time the coming week....)

Ciao!

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25 Comments:

Blogger tulipspeaks said...

Don't know why.. but i can understand what you are talking about in the poem, even without the footnote :)

hugsss

=am000nie=

5:35 PM  
Blogger anup.777 said...

Cool! U r 2 insightful.... :)

And finally, I've posted my thoughts on marriage... do check it out..

Strangely, it's below this post, as I had been working on it since Thursday, saving it as a draft in blogger itself...

9:19 PM  
Blogger sophie said...

i dont think that foot note is needed...
one can easily understand feel the peom without it..
neat...good work

6:23 AM  
Blogger anup.777 said...

Thanx 4 the encouragement Sophia ... thanx 4 dropping by... :)

7:48 AM  
Blogger Manjari said...

I agree with the others. the footnote was not needed. lovely words and emotions :)

11:45 AM  
Blogger Keshi said...

Very well written Anup!

**Yes he breathes.... but he's not alive
Yes he hurts.... but he doesn't cry
Yes he bleeds.... but he refuses to die
His wings are clipped.... but his spirit still flies high


I loved that bit.

However if u r relating this bit to a guy who hasnt found his soul mate, it cant be that bad mate :) c'mon most guys who find their soul mates would say this bit after the wedding lol!


Keshi.

3:15 PM  
Blogger anup.777 said...

@Lady,
Thanks for dropping by 2 encourage me...

@Keshi,
lolz... Most maybe.... but not me ... :) (At least that's my story for now... and I'm sticking to it! ;)

8:20 PM  
Blogger done said...

Hello:)
Thanks for your comment and prayers you said on my blog:) Great poem, and I get it, and here's a {{{{{{{{HUGE HUG}}}}}}}}} from me. Guys you all make it so hard to be human, at least women show our emotions, but then we go too far, and never stop! I guess that's why we need both men and women here on earth. You have a great day! Take care, Elisa:)

9:52 AM  
Blogger anup.777 said...

Thanks 4 dropping by Elisa... U take care as well... C ya!

10:08 AM  
Blogger Keshi said...

:)

Keshi.

3:52 PM  
Blogger Dalicia said...

when the time comes..you'll find your soulmate. but first, you must heal your pain. what you go through, will make you stronger.

10:28 PM  
Blogger anup.777 said...

@ keshi
a big :) right back at ya!

@ elaine
what you've said has inspired a poem... i'll get on that soon... thanx for it...

11:33 PM  
Blogger Dreamy Eyed Gal said...

i feel u dint need to xplain the poem at the end...its beautiful and can b understood...good post

2:27 AM  
Blogger Ash said...

Found an article that dealt with loneliness and aloneness recently ....
we all need a support system to live in a city away from home or our friends ....

true very very true ....
Ash

3:05 AM  
Blogger anup.777 said...

@DEGal
Thanks 4 ur encouragement... I need all that I can get :)

@Ash
Absolutely... I agree with u totally... as for the support system... I guess we bloggers are one such support system ... we open up our lives to each other... and as all are in the same boat... we naturally empathise with each other....

3:12 AM  
Blogger Michelle said...

awesome :-)

5:24 AM  
Blogger Este Miseria said...

i do post to another blog- i havent updated my profile in an age thats all.

the url is http://aleajactaest.rediffblogs.com

in case u dont remember what i'm replying to this is RE: your comment on my old blog abt me not updating.

6:45 AM  
Blogger Este Miseria said...

isuppose i have you to thank. for a long time now i have been reeling with the implications of going public with life on a weblog- and have not been too happy with it. i've decided to go back to my blogger account...guess change is all for the good eh? BTW i did read you comment on the other blog- mmm..messed up, well welcome to the club...i guess i'm pretty messed up as well.

8:21 AM  
Blogger anup.777 said...

@ Michelle
Thanks 4 ur generous compliment... :)

@ CA
Thanx 4 dropping by girl... I'll c u at ur own blog soon...

BTW, the peak work season is now upon me... the companies I track have started declaring their results .... so I'll be extremely busy on work stuff ... so postings to the blog will suffer for a while... but I just want u all 2 know that I'll miss u all... when I'm away... So don't forget me....

A special thanks to Amu, for the cool chat I had with her on her blog... and to Keshi... for being the sweet meanie that she is... :) U gals bring out the best in me... :)

8:26 AM  
Blogger whoami said...

GOD!! plz don't make it appear so much of a struggle :). ppl might give up even before trying :D

9:57 AM  
Blogger anup.777 said...

@whoami
:) ... lolz ...
... people know better than to take my musings at face value m8... ;)

10:16 AM  
Blogger Maya Cassis said...

oh the footnote was not required...the poem weaved its own magic.

11:32 AM  
Blogger anup.777 said...

Thanks a lot Maya! :)

9:17 PM  
Blogger still_figuring_out said...

it made a lot of sense to me! it is a beautiful poem. i like it! so sweetly have you penned down the emotions of someone searching for love..

11:09 PM  
Blogger anup.777 said...

Thanks sooo much SFO.... :)

12:37 AM  

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